I think that the name explains it all. Plus, I love editing, and I have nothing to do right now. Message me to confirm that you are still planning on having an editor for your essay. Then I'll know that I can send you my email.
Hahaha. I made a mistake in my own edit.
"..., you must [p]ut a comma afterwards."
True. That's because I've edited similar mistakes quite frequently.
I'm completely fine with anyone making fun of another person's grammar. I just feel that it's wrong to make a fool of oneself by doing the exact same thing.
YOU HAVE BEEN RANDOMLY SELECTED TO GET YOUR POST GRAMMATICALLY CORRECTED!!!
1) Mistake: "No they shouldn't and..."
Correction: "No[,] they shouldn't and..."
Explanation: Whenever you use the word "no" at the beginning of the sentence, and it is not being used as an adjective (i.e. "No man should..."), you must out a comma afterwards.
2) Mistake: "...shouldn't and this person..."
Correction: "shouldn't[,] and this person..."
Explanation: Flow issues. You need a breath between these two clauses.
3) Mistake: "...was to hard."
Correction: "...was to[o] hard."
Explanation: You used the wrong "too". "To" is generally is a preposition, and "too" is an adjective.
Note: Do not bash another person for their grammatical errors when you do the same. Down-vote this if you like. Just don't be hypocritical.
-GrammarNazi
YOU HAVE BEEN RANDOMLY SELECTED TO GET YOUR POST CORRECTED GRAMMATICALLY!!!
1) Mistake: "...you becuase I believe..."
Correction: "...you because I believe..."
Explanation: Spelling.
2) Mistake: "...the fetus has probably not..."
Correction: "...the fetus probably has not..."
Explanation: Syntax & General Flow of the Sentence.
-GrammarNazi
YOU HAVE BEEN RANDOMLY SELECTED TO GET YOUR POST CORRECTED GRAMMATICALLY!!!
1) Mistake: "Happy tree friends..."
Correction: "Happy Tree Friends..."
Explanation: It's a title. At least have the decency to make sure you capitalize everything.
2) Mistake: "...bloody but it is..."
Correction: "...bloody[,] but it is..."
Explanation: You need a comma when you connect two sentences with a conjunction. Note: Don't use the brackets; their purpose was to make the correction easier to see.
Oh, and I love Happy Tree Friends, so ignore the dispute. I changed the tag, though.
-GrammarNazi
Hello,
This is my debut on this website. An explanation of my purpose is in my profile.
Now to business:
to be sad that the person died because that person is going to start there real lifes in eternity.
1) Always capitalize at the beginning of every sentence.
2) Use "their", not "there".
3) When you have a contraction, put in an apostrophe. Your mistake: lifes Correction: life's
4) This is a fragment.
If you celebrate and have a party for the person that is dead that means that you are happy that the person died and it not here.
1) You should use commas to make sure you can breath when reading this aloud; this is a run-on sentence.
2) Mistake: "...that the person died and it not here." Correction: "...that the person died and is not here."
That is how a funeral is suppose to be with people crying and sad the person died.
1) Mistake: "That is how a funeral is suppose to be..." Correction: "That is how a funeral is supposed to be..."
2) Put a comma in between "be" and "with"; they are two different clauses.
3) Insert the word "that" in between "sad" and "the".
I am not saying you are a bad debater; you might be a good one or a bad one. What I am doing is trying to help you improve on your grammar, because, with good grammar, one can post easy-to-follow arguments that are direct and effective. Plus, I'm OCD over all of the grammatical errors that are seen on this website.
-GrammarNazi
