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Soukuin
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Efficiency is a measure of the effectiveness of your arguments. It is the number of up votes divided by the total number of votes you have (percentage of votes that are positive). Choose your words carefully so your efficiency score will remain high. | 100% |
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HI DONNIE YEN AKA IP MAN.
clear topic sentence - gives readers or rather MEEEEEEEEEE a clear preview of which aspect of history you are going to talk about. thanks! next, good use of examples BUTTTTT sentences are too abrupt. perhaps can use connectors like in addition, furthermore, etc? ANDDDD more needs to be elaborated on how this particular tsunami incident would benefit us in the future and such. otherwise, argument tends to be example-driven! AHHHHHH NOT GOOD. BUTTTTTT OVERALL, GOOD JOB!! ^_^ wheeeee~ japanese smiley!!!
signing off,
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yo qianhui!
good use of examples to substantiate your argument. BUTTTTT, more needs to be elaborated on the benefits and how it will affect the future should such natural disasters hit the shores again. in others words, more breadth. but anyhoo, good job!! wheeeee~ -twirls around-
sou kuin
hello claire.
1. good use of examples. very substiantial and supports your argument fully. examples are in depth.
2. however, you need to draw more insights from your examples and elaborate + explain why as seen from the examples, the study of history is beneficial. like what the ultimate benefits are and so on. othwerise, agrument would be example-driven! ON SHAPZZ AHHHH!
3. anyhow, good job! yipeeee!
sou kuin
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